I can't believe I haven't actually read any of these pages until now. Yeesh, what's wrong with me. @__@ Anyway, rather than flood you with incoming messages, I'll just comment on this page (you know, until there's more ).
Jinx has been elevated to my favorite character. He is positively adorable in these few pages and you've handled his various stages of emotion very nicely. Very often, I find when I read comics, that characters all have one look you see more than any other and it's often the only expression you see from them. It makes everything so cardboard-feeling. That's the main reason comics have lost my interest in recent years. But in three pages alone, you've conveyed EXACTLY how Jinx is feeling, without him having to say it. Kudos.
And I gotta say it. I'm a sucker for old black and white movies so I'm really loving the feel of this. For me, black and white offers a layer of depth that color doesn't.
I really can't wait for you to pick this back up again because I'm seriously hooked and I want more. <3
daw hes cute as a kid/teen whatever age he is Loving this comic so far... Its almost perfect only thing im having trouble with is the layout of the panels... some of em are so small... maybe thats just me... I have no idea what professional standard is and just looking at most of your art your way better than I am XD but in any case im loving it! I really want to buy it when its out as a graphic novel! Street culture is so my thing Wicked stuff!
oooow, how i get it, this is the main character telling the history to a diferent character... thats why this is chapter 0... is actualy kinda cleaver, changeing the sean from black adn white to colors changes the enviroment a little bit
BTW, this fencing tornaments have a referee?, are those legal?, cause that girl has no freaking armor on her!